MarikBentusi's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Birdy in the Snow]

The yoice is too geeky o,Ô

And the story is... not so good, i think. I see that you have talent, next time you need a better topic.

DM-Demitri responds:

Thank you! For now I'm just working on the technical side of actually making the Flash work and making it available for others to see and comment on. I have alot better story-lines (and alot longer, too) but I didn't want to make those first until I could find and work out some of the other details with the ones I'm not as fond of. Thanks for your support though and I'll keep up the work!
~Demitri

[Simon Slaughters ep.1...]

This needs more story!

For a beginning, this one was good: The graphics were OK and the sound was sufficiently. But this thing needs more story, a main part or something. I think you should work on it and this time you just wanted to show, what you have made. And its good, no question, but for a real movie, you need more... just more story, it was too short for a great movie - but i hope its not going to be blammed, because it has at least one high point.

sweex20 responds:

thanks for your comment im very glad you liked it though mayB i should tell you that this is the first ep. of a long story... ep.2. is comming rather soon and keeping it short keeps ppl. interested, if you tell the complete story in 1 and make 9 others with just some trash that has sumthing to do with the first one... ppl. wont watch he others and the score will suk...
thanks any way for thinking about it ^^

[GEshows]

I see, that you have talent :)

Keep up the good work! Improve your graphics, the combination of music and animations is great! I see much potential in your movie - go on!

GEshows responds:

Thanks :)

[LL - Screen Episode 2]

Good. Keep up the good work :)

As everything, its improveable. But you are on the right way and the graphics are fantastic! Keep your way of simple characters! :)

LAVAGASM responds:

Well I always try to improve myself each time I use Flash. Thanks for watching!

[Madness Mini 3]

Good parody

Better then most tributes to madness. :) I like it, just work on the number of frames and maybe more story. But its very good work! Can not wait for your own series! :))

Shrinkz responds:

obviously a lot of people can't wait for my series! i can't wait to start it!